Well, I'd not repeat the Intro twice....there's not enough happening to repeat these vocals....the echo, which starts at 0:12 here should start at 0:06. Same problem around 3:25, by the way.

By the way, I think it would also work even better, if the echo was going right into the beat. Just don't fadeout the echovocals and start the beat at 0:16 / 017....THEN start to fadeout the echo. This would make this part more efficient for the audience.

At 0:41 there are some snaresounds and a beat (which starts with the kickdrum at 0:51). The snare could be a little bit louder. The kickdrum works to me.

The pitched snaresound is okay.

I don't get the break at 1:22. First you throw the music out of the rythm here. It starts way too late. Further you just cut the beat which played all the time before....this would maybe even work, if the next part started at the right time.

The vocals at 2:04 are too loud. They work at 2:11 - besides, they are still a little bit too loud here - but the repeating "Don't you" needs less volume.

At 3:19 you just repeat the intro - including the following line at around 3:33. The problem is, there is no kind of a beat between 3:19 and 3:56 (no, I don't accept a single snare to be a backbeat.)

Actually, there's not much happening in this song. It has no great hookline or melody, it repeats itself and it has some problems (I listed above).

Ending this song with a fadeout, after having complete beat stops within the song itself also is very dissapointing.

Guess you can do better.