This is a good work, but needs to be touched up a bit. The song starts abruptly, with no real intro. I would cut the backround sound at :47 - 1:00, and let the new beat takeover. Also, there are two sections where the song just repeats over and over; from 1:40 - 2:09, and again at 3:06 - 3:39. Lastly, nothing happens from 3:51 - to the end of the song. Not sure why, but it should be cut. Nice voice, nice beat, just needs some fine tuning.