the lyrics are okay for a dance track, nothing special.. no brain needed..
you have a good voice, so you should concentrate on the music now..
make it more interesting to listen to... a change of the beat.. a bridge.. get a sense of melody into your track.. it's always the same music.. getting on my nerves after awhile.. i'm not sure but it sounds overmodulated...
p.s.: maybe scifi-boy's in love with you already but his comment won't help you with your music...
I agree with smartsmurf. Is there a reverb on the lyrics? The voice portion needs to be crisp, to contrast the music. Also, the bass seems to be overpowering the lyrics. The project is pretty good, but should be cleaned up a bit to take it to the next level.