first off please try to find a proper cover for your tracks (and pls not your face again...a C.O.V.E.R....thats not really hard, if you cant make one on your own google some pictures, there is always a proper cover pic ;))

now the track:
the last tracks you published sounded kinda like demos to me, but nothing more, no structure (intro, middlepart,outro) and always so monotonous... just like this one.
you create beats but no real tracks. try to make a track next time this is what you can play as backround music in an old 80's serial like magnum or knight rider, but nothing more. and to be honest if i were the boss of a club no matter what type of music they play i wouldnt play this for the mentioned reasons.

i'll give you 3* but please try to make tracks and no demos or movie backround music (or if you continue , puplish the song under the movie score genre....this is no electro music for me, sorry pal)