Dont go for too long

samuelaisa schreef op 02.06.2010 om 00:12 uur
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Do not go for too long is a very nice song that

I made personally for my self this song was made

the same month I fell in love with my real lover

she was away to get some ingredient to make food for me

and it seem she was a bit late as I would think ,

and I was thinking is this always going to be like this

when your woman that you love live the house just for one minute

you start to get worried and start to feel like she has been gone

for so long even if she was away for just 1 hour


 

Don’t go for too long

Intro

Honey I am feeling cold

Don’t go for too long

Chorus x1

Honey ,honey , honey

I want you by my side

Honey ,honey , honey

Don’t go for too long

Bridge

Verse

I have been all alone

I have been all alone

Its so cold in here

I have been all alone

I have been all alone

Where have you been

Honey its so cold in here

I want you honey

I want you by my side

Honey I can not stay all alone

I am feeling cold

I want you by my side

Chorus x2

Honey ,honey , honey

I want you by my side

Honey ,honey , honey

Don’t go for too long

Bridge

Honey its seems

You have gone for too long

x2

Reacties

siggi_s schreef op 02.06.2010 om 00:21 uur
Hey,

mal was ganz anderes hier!

Klasse gesungen!   Ohrwurm! Nur das Ende geht gar nicht!

G Siggi
samuelaisa schreef op 02.06.2010 om 00:24 uur
I love your song man
MZed schreef op 02.06.2010 om 00:46 uur
Yeah, that's pop music.

Toller Sound und originiell, den 5. Stern kann man bei dem Songende nicht vergeben, wenn schon kein ending, dann zumindest ein fadeout!
Soundmacher schreef op 02.06.2010 om 00:59 uur
Gut geacht
Wer singt da ???
LG
Jürgen
Spartano schreef op 02.06.2010 om 07:57 uur
Exzellente Musik Lied, Wenn der Schluss nicht so Abrupt zu ende wäre!
Herzlichen Gruß Spartano!

Mein Künstler name ist Spartano 301, meine Freunde nennen mich Joachim, meine Jahrelange Erfahrung in der Musik ist das abmischen ( Mastern ) der Musik.

Mein Musikstill ist sehr breit gefächert, Trance, Dance, Pop, und Rock.

Musik ist für mich ein wichtige Teil meines Lebens, und es macht Spaß immer neue Musiker kennen zu lernen,

lg, von Joachim.

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Voormalige gebruiker schreef op 02.06.2010 om 10:38 uur
Hello,

something quite different here in pop and a beautiful song
the end is not as good and therefore to me 4 stars

LG sima200
Lehar schreef op 02.06.2010 om 15:53 uur
.......hope you will be it, for the rest of your life...........!

Well, what a luck, that she has been away for so long, otherwise this song would never have originated. Your chorus goes right into the music-heart, but it's a pity about the cut-off ending. Perhaps at least a Fade-Out, or let the drums do the end!
Did you do all by yourself? 


Regards
Lehar
X5er schreef op 02.06.2010 om 22:39 uur
I agree with you, it is a very nice song. But why did you do it for yourself and not for your girl friend? Sometimes music is more than flowers. I like your song. But the end sounds a little bit hard interrupted. Maybe a soft fade out would be better. 

X5er