Commenti

Farstom ha scritto il 22.10.2013 ore 19:06

not bad

bits long.
little bare.
too many repetitions.
but it does not matter.
here is a acadenic site and we learn from each other.
it comes good

Modificato l'ultima volta da Farstom il 22.10.2013, 19:06, Modificato in totale 1-volte.

I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

smartsmurf ha scritto il 24.10.2013 ore 22:30

First of all... I like this piece, its minimal concept (I make music like this too...)

...but it's like Farstom said. For a track that long there need to be more variation in your sounds... or shifting of sounds (while keeping the melodic concept). What I also miss a little is a story that's told... meaning track structure... intro... main part... break... main part variation... and so on. (I hope you know what I mean)