The Renaissance man

JEiffel Posté à 02/09/2018 08:36
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Balises:

Stepping down from the stage

Where you’ve long been standing,

Is not a pleasant move, by all means.

Turning off the light

That once, on you, was shining ,

Only fools enjoy the change, it would seem.

 

He was one of them and wished to be,

A musician for all, a painter on the walls,

A renaissance man to be.

 

Before, confort was his motto, his prayer.

Work and money as an aim to be free.

But they enslaved him and broke his desire,

And took him where he didn't want to be.

 

Now he wished to find his other me.

A challenger in all, explorer to be born,

A renaissance man to be.

 

No one, no time, and no constraint,

Will ever keep him chained again

No more don’t , no more does

He has no time to play the duty blues

 

Stepping down from the stage

Where you’ve long been standing,

Is not a pleasant move, by all means.

Turning off the light

That once, on you, was shining ,

Only fools enjoy the change, it would seem.

 

He was one of them and wished to be,

A musician for all, a painter on the walls,

A renaissance man to be.

A challenger in all, explorer to be born,

A renaissance man to be

Commentaires

Charlys-Music Posté à 02/09/2018 11:24

Musik ist stark

Ancien utilisateur Posté à 02/09/2018 12:20

Mal Akkorde und Songstruktur, die weitab vom Meanstream liegen ----- also Pop?

Wohl wesentlicher die "Musikalität": Mir gefällt es sehr gut. ------------ Hingegen der Mix (Master): Das Piano kommt gut, doch alle anderen Instrumente samt Gesang klanglich zu verhalten. Entsprechend ist auch die Sprachverständlichkeit nicht, wie es mit einem anderen Master sein könnte. Sorry -- was ist, das ist.

Doch Mix/Master hin oder her: Dieses Werk hat musikalisch einen hohen Wert ---- gerne gehört. ❤️

Liebe Grüße - Eddie

franco-galateo Posté à 02/09/2018 19:32

overall I would say good .. i appreciate this song..

Franco

Ancien utilisateur Posté à 21/02/2019 17:49

Bonjour J.F., votre professionnelle prestation m'a plu beaucoup, vous êtes un artiste accompli. Bravo ( j'ai adoré la très bonne exécution au piano).

GG.