Commentaires

Farstom Posté à 24/03/2014 20:29

Not bad .
good experiment .
Some pieces are nice.

Dernière modification de Farstom le 24/03/2014, 20:29, Modifié 1 fois au total.

I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

Procyon Posté à 25/03/2014 17:33

As Farstom said, there are some good ideas in there.  They just need to be developed on their own.  Otherwise, the composition is just too long and chaotic - a long montage of unrelated themes.

 

Comme l'a dit Farstom, il ya quelques bonnes idées là-dedans. Ils ont juste besoin d'être mis au point leur propre chef. Sinon, la composition est tout simplement trop longue et chaotique - un long montage de thèmes sans rapport.