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MuggeMaker Posté à 29/06/2014 07:56

Schöner Trance.

Ganz gut gemacht.

Leomax Posté à 29/06/2014 11:13

 i like it

Mondschwester Posté à 29/06/2014 12:56

Hi there!

The beginning is cool! I like the rhythm of the drums! Then from 0:30 I dislike the fast changes of the harmonies. They could be two bars. But the sounds are great!

Though it is a little bit boring because the harmonies are too often repeated. And of course a melody is missing!

The end is good because you make an fade-out.

Nice track but much to do!!!

Greetings
Mondschwester

Ancien utilisateur Posté à 29/06/2014 22:35

Hi !

I love the rhythms.  Good head bobbing music. The chromatic movement of the chords towards the beginning were interesting and very different.  I might slow it down a bit if I were doing it, although I tend to play everything too fast or speed up.

I liked it though. Everyone has their own opinion


Trish

Sandro_Glavina_Channel Posté à 30/06/2014 02:22

Nice track ! very good percussions !! ciao da sandro

Dernière modification de Sandro_Glavina_Channel le 30/06/2014, 02:22, Modifié 1 fois au total.

Sandro Glavina is an italian composer, named L'Uomo e L'Ombra. The choice of the name derives from the title of the album "L'uomo e l'ombra" of the band "Abstract Music Nuova Esistenza", an experimental group founded by Sandro Glavina together with his friends in the mid-70s.

In the period 2009-2022, L'Uomo e L'Ombra has done 84 albums. The compositions of Sandro Glavina are partly influenced by progressive rock. Sandro has developed a personal style with many experimentations and actualizations. He offers music beyond borders by intertwining different styles in crossover with each other. Prog, psychedelia, classical, post-rock, jazz, pop are some of the influences that dissolve in ambient atmospheres, citations of contemporary music and minimalist nuances. Sandro Glavina aka L'Uomo e L'Ombra plays the music using VSTI synthesizers, keyboards and adds some loops. Sandro isn't a professional musician, composes and plays music just for fun, but his works reach a good outcome, pleasant to listen. L'UOMO E L'OMBRA

https://www.jamendo.com/artist/495948/l-uomo-e-l-ombra/albums

https://www.reverbnation.com/luomoelombra/songs

https://www.facebook.com/luomoelombra/

   

Ancien utilisateur Posté à 01/07/2014 19:41

Hi! Ich weiß nicht, ob es anderen auch so geht. Mir fehlt eine Struktur, die Ordnung in dem Stück bringt.

LG / aces-e37

Farstom Posté à 01/07/2014 21:54

not bad

bit messy

but good trying

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I know nothing about music. Only listened .. Using technology also makes possible for me to be able to make music.

  I am also into photography amateur.

I'm not here for stars score but coment with advice for improvement of my music.


at my coment on music of others, I remain honest. this must be mutual .

I give my voice just as public and not as someone who knows something from music.

 I'm open to all criticism. I want to learn something

greeting

farstom

susanne-g95 Posté à 06/07/2014 22:57

Hi Dollet,

klingt etwas chaotisch, weil die Wechsel zu schnell sind und die Melodie "verwurschtelt" klingt. Muß Aces da zustimmen. Das ist aber natürlich Geschmackssache. Die Aussteuerung ist gut. Der Bass fehlt mir jedoch.

Gruß

Susanne