Please take care of building a song of his own. I hear always the same melodie about her in the music theme. In mix with vocal and instr. you are able, to make it a little better. I know this. Please take care too for your profil. I want to know more about you!!
I think you wanted zo much in one melody...
Some of the samples do not fit together...
But I´n sure you can "repair" it...
eipast is right when he remarks on always the same melody...
Bad ending...
Honestly 3*
Franz