the idea is good but some things dont really fit to this electrohouse track, like the drums, they are way to hard for house beats... these drums fit better to a techno track then to house the house drums are softer i mean they are filtered a bit more what makes them softer...  some fx are just there, but you wouldnt notice it if they werent there... like they are used at the wrong place..
all in all its 3*-4*, because of the sudden end i give you 3*
but the track has a good potential ;)