you still gotta long way to go (but most of us did).

the track is too repetitive, no change of the synths / pads / beat. synths and pads shouldn't dominate the whole track. pads need some fading so you don't recognize them at once. if you finish the pads at 2:16 please use some fading. a little cutting mistake at 2:45 and the rise at the end doesn't fit. the end shouldn't be just cut...

but hey, my comment should be a reason for you to continue what you're doing and besides that listen to a lot of good music (my way of learning...)...

smartsmurf